The diagram below shows the process of growing and preparing pineapples and pineapple products.
Overall
, it takes a year for pineapple
to reach full maturity. There are many steps different depend
on size and purpose uses.
In the first stage, the pineapples are grown in reasonable Change the form of the verb
depending
environment
Change the noun form
environments
such
as sufficient sunlight and warm temperature
( 28 to 30 degrees Celsius). Each Fix the agreement mistake
temperatures
pineapple
are
planted at a distance Change the verb form
is
26
cm apart. When the Change preposition
of 26
pineapple
to reach
7 months old are applied chemical by Change the verb form
reaches
famer
to improve Correct your spelling
farmers
farmer
quality
of their. After 5 months, the Correct article usage
the quality
pineapple
to reach
Change the verb form
reaches
height
Correct article usage
a height
30
cm and 2kg, Change preposition
of 30
it
Correct word choice
and it
seen
to Add a missing verb
is seen
ready
for Add a missing verb
be ready
harveting
.Correct your spelling
harvesting
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