The charts show world pineapple exports by the top three pineapple-producing countries in 2009 and 2019, and a breakdown of the cost to the consumer of each pineapple in 2019.
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pineapple
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established
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than
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, most of the payment is for distrubution
and retailing.
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distribution
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statess
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tones
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pineapple
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pineapple
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transport
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