The graph below shows percentages of types of waste that were recycled in a town between 2000 and 2010.

The graph below shows percentages of types of waste that were recycled in a town between 2000 and 2010.
A glance at the bar chart provided reveals the proportions of kinds of waste recycled in a city from 2000 and 2010. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is evident that there was an upward trend witnessed in all data. A dramatic increase in all the recycling of waste after a decade. In terms of plastic’s information, it started at 10%. Simultaneously, it increased slightly and reached approximately 25% in 2010. With regard to cans’ data, it began at just 12%.
Although
it declined minimally, it elevated dramatically and topped about 35% over the period of 10 years. With the exception of the paper and metal percentages, there was a steadily uniform trend in the others, except for the growth level,
While
paper rose consistently from merely 11% to under 30%, the metal abruptly rose from over 10% to 40%.
Finally
, the paper was nearly three times as much as itself in the previous ten years,
while
the metal in 2000 was quadruple compared to itself in 2010.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "dramatic" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling rates
  • types of waste
  • paper and cardboard
  • plastic and glass
  • noticable increases
  • stable
  • landfill sites
  • decrease
  • percentage
  • 10-year period
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