The table below shows the percentage use of four different fuel types to generate electricity in five Asian countries in 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Fuel type used to generate electricity (%)
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fuel
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generate
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generating
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Coal&lignite
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coal and lignite
Hydro&wind
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hydro and wind
other
in five Asian continental nations like Malaysia, Singapore, Thailand, South Korea and Japan in 2005. The units are measured by the percentage.
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others
Overall
, Nuclear Linking Words
fuel
was used to Use synonyms
generating
electricity in all these five nations as compared to other fuels.
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generate
,
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in
Malaysia Change preposition
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had
used more Unnecessary verb
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coal & lignite for generating Correct article usage
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current
which was 61% and Nuclear was just below Add an article
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one-fifth
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the other
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used very low. Coal & Change the verb form
were
lignite
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and lignite
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utilised more in Singapore, Verb problem
are
similarly
, other Linking Words
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fuel
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fuels
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also
used more which was 42% and 39% respectively. South Korea was taken electricity by using more Hydro & wind which was just below Add a missing verb
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fuel
was used by 33%.
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In contrast
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had
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did
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use
fuel
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while
other Linking Words
fuel
and petroleum products Use synonyms
was
used more which was 42 and 36 percent respectively. Japan Change the verb form
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used more Nuclear to generate current.Unnecessary verb
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fuel with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "diagram" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just below" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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