The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates the information about the
number
of people travel
to five different places between 1990 and 2005. The figures are given in Wrong verb form
travelling
million
.
Fix the agreement mistake
millions
Oveall
it can be seen Correct your spelling
Overall
form
the table that, Correct your spelling
from
every
Change preposition
in every
periods
in Change to a singular noun
period
the
question, the Correct article usage
apply
number
of traveling
to Europe always led Change the spelling
travelling
other
places. Change preposition
to other
Moreover
, the number
of tourist
increase every 5 years.
In 1990, the highest Change to a plural noun
tourists
number
of people is visiting to
Europe with 280.2 Remove the preposition
apply
million
, followed by America and Asia and the pacific
, with the figures Capitalize word
Pacific
are
being 80.5 and 60.2 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
respectively. The total number
of people who went for travel rose form
448.9 Correct your spelling
from
million
to 693.7 million
in 2005.
For traveling
to America which Change preposition
Traveling
is
the second Wrong verb form
was
popular
in 1990 Correct quantifier usage
most popular
continued
grow to the highest Add the particle
continued to
number
at 118.2 million
in 2000 before decline
minimally to 113.2 in Wrong verb form
declining
next
five Correct article usage
the next
year
and was exceeded by traveling to Asia and Fix the agreement mistake
years
th
Correct your spelling
the
pacific
. The Capitalize word
Pacific
number
of visiting other places are
the same trend that Change the verb form
is
increase
steadily except Wrong verb form
is increasing
America
.Change preposition
in America
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