The bar graph above shows average earnings in the Republic of Ireland in 5 different years, with projections for the future. Earnings are in US dollars
The provided bar chart illustrates median salaries in the Republic of Ireland in various 5 years with estimations for the future. The figure shows that the unit of currency is in United States
dollars
.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that wages dramatically increased in every recorded time period, except in 2008, when they decreased slightly. As a result
, incomes are expected to increase in the future in year
2018.
Change the article
the year
In addition
, the median salary in 1968 was less than 8,000 US dollars
and then
increased a decade later to around 10,000 US dollars
in 1978. Moreover
, the median wage slightly rose to more than 12,000 US dollars
in 1988 and probably climbed to around 15,000 dollars
in 1988. However
, the mean income slightly fell to around 14,000 US dollars
in 2008. Lastly
, wages are forecast to increase in the future by more than 18,000 US dollars
in the Republic of Ireland.Submitted by alisa.chuaypalad on
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