The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the
quantity
of Change the quantifier
number
shops
closed and the ones opened for a seven-year
period
since 2011 in one country. During this
period
, openings experienced sharp
decline Correct article usage
a sharp
while
closures witnessed a slight reduction.
Commencing at significant
rate of 8500 new Add an article
a significant
shops
joining (highest amount ever) and 6400 leaving the market chain in 2011, in the following year
, closure rates eclipsed that of opennings
. Seeing a sharp reduction to almost 4000 Correct your spelling
openings
openned
Correct your spelling
open
shops
, the trend witnessed a linearly mild climb for a two-year
period
up to 6100 stores
in 2014. On the flip side, closures witnessed mild fluctuations for the first three years, reaching close to oppenings
in 2014.
Since 2014, closed Correct your spelling
openings
shops
established the lowest rate ever by only 500 added stores
, regaining 5000 newly closed shops
by the following year
, it remained almost constant with negligible fluctuations until the end of the period
. On the other hand
, opened stores
saw a mild reduction since 2014, overshadowing that of openings, leveled
off at 4000 Change the spelling
levelled
stores
per year
for two consecutive years up to 2017. However
during the Add a comma
However,
last
year
it experienced a moderate decline to be finished at 3000 Add a comma
year,
stores
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Vocabulary: Replace the words shops, period, year, stores with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduction" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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