The graph below shows the percentage of university students studying arts degrees over four different decades in three continents.

The graph below shows the percentage of university students studying arts degrees over four different decades in three continents.
A glance at the line graph presents the proportions of college
students
undertaking arts degrees from 1961 to 2011 in four nations. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is apparent that there was an upward trend experienced in all countries. Arts degrees were widely acclaimed in Singapore and Thailand and the year 2011 marked the point at which the portion of
art
students
in Thailand moderately outweighed Singapore. In 1961,
students
enrolled in
art
degrees in Thailand began at just below 25%. It went down slightly throughout three decades before witnessing a dramatic surge to peak at around 45% in 2011.
Subsequently
, the figure for Singapore commenced at 15% and faced a relentless undulation to finish at its peak at 40%. With regards to the
art
students
in the Philippines, it began at about 7%, grew stably for the next decades to 15% and hovered around that level in the remainder of the period given.
On the other hand
, the percentage of
art
students
in Malaysia began at around 3% which was the lowest among the others, it saw a constant growth to reach 20% in the final year.
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