The table below describes water usage for 3 different purposes in 6 countries in 2003.
The table shows
water
consumption
in Canada
, United Kingdom
, China
, Australia
, India
& Japan
for domestic, industrial & agricultural in 6 countries in year
2003.
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the year
Australia
recorded the highest proportion of water
consumption
in domestic
sector among the five countries of 65%, followed by Add an article
the domestic
Canada
with 63% of water
usage. In contrast
, China
and United
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the United
Kingdom
consumed only 6% and 5% of water
in domestic
sector respectively. Correct article usage
the domestic
Furthermore
, Japan
and India
used 19% and 10% of water
respectively for domestic demand
.
It is obvious that Canada
consumed about 32% of water
for industrial purpose
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purposes
Japan
consumed 15% for the industry demand
. On the other hand
, India
, United
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the United
Kingdom
, China
& Australia
recorded below 10% of the use of Correct word choice
and Australia
water
for industrial purpose
.
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purposes
United
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The United
Kingdom
had the highest demand
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purpose
with 90% percentage, followed by Fix the agreement mistake
purposes
China
and India
, both 87% and 82%. Meanwhile, Japan
's use of water
for agriculture demand
reached about 66%. Australia
's demand
for water
recorded half percentage
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a percentage
Japan
's consumption
. Meanwhile, Canada
recorded the lowest water
consumption
of 5%.Submitted by firmanrasyidi on
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