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The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuk County at different times of the year.

The chart below shows information about different species of birds observed in Woodchuk County at different times of the year.
#information #species #birds #woodchuk #county #times #year
The given table illustrates different
species
 of birds which could be seen in Woodchuk country at different periods of
time
.
Overall
, many
species
 were seen in
summer
Correct article usage
the summer
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 period
while
 there were a small number of varieties were observed in
Add an article
the winter
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winter
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wintertime
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time
. In
winter
, Juncos are the only
species
 that could be watched in that
time
 and cardinals, crows and woodpeckers were observed in the
winter
 and
also
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apply
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summer
.
However
, mockingbirds,oroles and vireos couldn't be seen in
winter
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wintertime
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time
. With
regrads
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regards
 to the
summer
, bluebirds,
mockingbird
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mockingbirds
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, orioles and vireos were the birds which were observed only in
Add an article
the summer
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summer
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summertime
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time
.
Furthermore
,
rest
Correct article usage
the rest
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 of the
species
 were
catched
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caught
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 both in
winter
 and
summer
.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words species, time, summer, winter with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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