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The graph below shows the changes in food consumption by Chinese people between 1975 and 2010.

The graph below shows the changes in food consumption by Chinese people between 1975 and 2010.
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The given graph provides data regarding how many alternations of three ranges of food (
Meat
,
Salt
 and
Fish
) were eaten by China populations over a span of 25
year
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years
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 from 1985 to 2010. At
the
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first glance,
it is clear that
Fish
 was consumed by a host of Chinese people,
meanwhile
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 the ingestion of
Salt
 gradually declined over a
25- year
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25-year
 period.
Furthmore
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Furthermore
, the quantity of
Meat
 eaten shot up marginally. In 1985, nearly 600
grams
 of
Fish
was
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were
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intook
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in took
took
 by
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an awerege
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awerege
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average
 Chinese
person
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people
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,
however
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however,
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this
 figure was much higher rather than contrasting to
Salt
 or
Meat
, under
the
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500 and only 100
grams
specially
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.
Inspite
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In spite
a
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gradual decrease
of
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in
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Fish
 consumption between 1990 and 1995, its statistic
was leaped
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leaped
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 substantially,
hence
 that reached the top (rate)
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approximately
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of approximetly
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approximetly
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approximately
 895
grams
 in 2010 It is
also
apperant
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apparent
 that, the ingestion gap
among
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between
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 the
Salt
 and
Meat
 was reduced. The proportion of
Salt
falled
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fell
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 to 200
grams
in
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at
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 the end of the period. As opposed to it, the
numbers
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number
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 of eaten
Meat
 obtained
as
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at
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 the same level as
Salt
by
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in
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 2010.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words meat, salt, fish, grams with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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