The table below shows the preferred TV programs by the different age groups in a european country in 2012.

The table below shows the preferred TV programs by the different age groups in a european country in 2012.
The table provides information about the percentages of preferred TV shows by the various age groups in European countries in 2012.
Overall
,
it is clear that
cartoon programs became the most favourable option for adolescents.
In addition
, teenagers are mostly interested in feature films,
while
the category of people who prefer
news
programs is dominated by young adults.
To begin
with, the majority of European children usually watched cartoons and sports, which accounted for 29% and 22%, respectively.
In addition
, the feature films and soap operas shared similar numbers among children at 18% and 17%, respectively.
However
, less than 10% of kids preferred to watch
news
and TV dramas.
Moreover
, there were equal proportions in the teenagers and early adults categories. In terms of teenagers, as many as 23% of them spent their time watching feature films, followed by
news
at 19%, sports at 18%, and cartoons at 18%.
On the other hand
, the young adults chose to enjoy
news
which marked up 23%.
However
, the remaining TV programs in
this
category showed a range of 13-21%, except the cartoons which accounted for a mere 4%.
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