The graph below shows annual water usage (in millions of cubic meters) by industries in some countries
The bar graph illustrates the amount of utilizing
water
during a year by different type
of industrial Fix the agreement mistake
types
field
(fuel, foods/beverages, machinery, metal, chemicals, paper and textiles) in some regions. The values Fix the agreement mistake
fields
measured
by cubic meters.
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are measured
Overall
, it can be seen that the chemicals category have
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has
most
use of Correct article usage
the most
water
both for ground
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groundwater
water
and public supply. Additionally
, the amount of water
usage
had
highest for Verb problem
was
ground
water
in all of the categories except machinery
and foods sector. The enormous Correct article usage
the machinery
ground
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groundwater
water
quantity was 430 million while
the public supply usage
was 240 million for chemical
industry. Add an article
the chemical
Furthermore
the lowest rate was 10 million and Add a comma
Furthermore,
this
utilizing
for fuel and textiles in public supply Wrong verb form
is utilised
usage
area
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areas
also
machinery for ground
water
. The highest ground
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groundwater
water
usage
except
chemical type in metal, paper, foods&drinks it was 240, 190 and 110 respectively.
As can be seen, the fuel and textiles categories have Add the preposition
except for
least
spending Correct article usage
the least
water
.Change preposition
on water
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