The table below show th number of cars produced im three countries from 2003 to 2009. Sumarize the infomation by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make compairisons where relevant.
The table provides the distribution of cars manufactured in 3 different countries
such
as Argentina , Thailand
and Australia between 2003 and 2009 .
Firstly
, it is immediately noticeable that in 2003 Thailand
produced a great number of automobiles and was equal to 735.825 . In comparison , manufacturing in Argentina and Australia was negligible and accounted for 235.088 and 452.163 respectively . In 2006 Thailand
showed the
record number of producing at 1.162.356 . In other states , Correct article usage
a
this
indicator was almost three times less
.
Secondly
, in 2009 car manufacturing in Thailand
decreased from 1.162.356 to 999.963 . Also
, a fall was observed in Australia and constitute
245.265 . Wrong verb form
constituted
On the contrary
, the amount
of cars manufactured in Argentina increased Change the quantifier
number
more
than 100.000 .
Looking from an Change preposition
by more
overall
perspective , it is clear that
Thailand
was the leader in producing vehicles for the period under review .Submitted by abdurahimov03 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words thailand with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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