The graph shows the number of teens ( 13-17 years) and adults ( 18 years and above) who attended the cinema in Singapore between 2000 and 2010.

The diagram illustrates the data of Singaporean teenagers and

the

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18-year-old

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18-year-olds

and above who went to the

cinema

over a period of 10

years

.

Overall

, there are different amounts of people depending on their ages and time.

Furthermore

, adolescents who

watched

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movies in the

cinema

is

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higher than the grown-ups in

this

country. It can be seen that in 2000 and 2001 over 41,000 people from 13-17

years

decreased considerably to around 25,000 compared with about 22,000 adults rose strongly to approximately 45,000.

However

, from 2001 the number of

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younger visiting

to

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the

cinema

increased sharply and peaked at about 65,000 in 2005, and

then

dipped bottom 20,000 in 2008,

whereas

the older ones showed a rapid fluctuation. In the

last

2

years

2008 – 2010 teens who attended the

cinema

rose again

while

the 18

years

plus ones continued to rise and fall. Generally, it can be concluded that in Singapore the people who visited the

cinema

vary

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significantly in

ages

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age

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during

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between

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2000 and 2010.