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The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given line graph depicts the general
birth
 rates in percentage between
USA
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the USA
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 and
China
 from 1920 to 2000.
Overall
,
China
 and the
USA
 demonstrate a similar pattern and show downward trajectories on the line graph. Both countries exhibit two peaks: a lower peak
at
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in
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 1932 (around 15%) and a higher peak
at
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in
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 1952 (20% in the
USA
 and 15% in
China
). Meanwhile, the two lines plummet in 1945 (
reach at
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reaching
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 merely 5%), given that the
birth
 rate in
China
 falls 5 years earlier than that in the
USA
. Talking about the downward trend, there are
less
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fewer
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 newborns in
USA
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the USA
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 within the years under examination, slightly declining from around 10% to 7%.
This
 decrease
also
 appears in
China
, dropping more significantly from 10% to 2%, resulting
a
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in a
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forth-fifths
different
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difference
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 as compared to the
begining
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beginning
.
Nonetheless
, women
give
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gave
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birth
 more in the
USA
 than
that
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apply
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in
China
in
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apply
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most of the time except
1920
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in 1920
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-1930 and 1940-1945. At the turning point
1940
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of 1940
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,
China
's rate
remain
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remained
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 static for five years at 5%. In conclusion,
USA
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the USA
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 has
accomodated
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accommodated
 more babies than
China
within
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between
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 1920 to 2000, yet both countries face the same challenge of falling
birth
rate
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rates
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words birth, usa, china with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "downward" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "falls" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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