The graph below shows tge sales of children's books,adult fuction and education books between 2002 and 2006.

The graph below shows tge sales of children's books,adult fuction and education books between 2002 and 2006.
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The line graph gives information about how many
books
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namely,children's and educational
books
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,and adult fiction were purchased by people in the years
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2002 to 2006.
Overall
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,it is evident that
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figure for children's
books
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witnessed a significant increase
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adult fiction declined rapidly over the period.
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,it is
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worth mentioning that educational
books
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show a small growth during the period.
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