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Line graph shows the consumption of fats between 1971 and 1997

Line graph shows the consumption of fats between 1971 and 1997
The line graph shows the changes in the consumption of fats from 1971 to 1997.
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, the number of two types of fat including butter and margarine tended to decrease,
while
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 the figure for low and reduced fat spreads increased considerably. As can be seen in the graph, commencing at approximately 150
grams
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 weekly per person in 1971, the figure for butter
then
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 had a slight reduction in 1981.
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, the number declined significantly after more than 20
years
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 to roughly 50
grams
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. The second type of fat, margarine reached 100
grams
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 in 1971 and ranked second.
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 type of fat has a lot of fluctuation in the number of consumers compared to the other two types. After 5
years
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, in 1976, the amount of margarine consumed decreased by about 20
grams
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 per person. After that, the graph of
this
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 type of fat continued to increase and decrease over the
years
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 until 1997 reached the lowest amount of about 20
grams
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. The statistics
also
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 show that consumption of low and reduced fat spreads that began appearing in 1986 reached approximately 20
grams
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. More than ten
years
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 later,
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 fat data in 1997 was four-fold the data in 1986.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words grams, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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