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the pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the us between 1988 and 2000. summarise the information and comparing

the pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the us between 1988 and 2000. summarise the information and comparing
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The pie charts and table show details about the total value and sources of
fish
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 imported into the United States between the years 1988 and 2000.
Overall
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, at first sight,
it is clear that
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 the total value is billions of dollars in three periods.
Also
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, the sources of
fish
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 imported to the US, are divided into three categories,
China
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,
Canada
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 and other regions. At the beginning of the year 1988, the total rate in billions of dollars represents a number of 6.57.
In addition
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, for the same year, The country of
Canada
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 is the source of
fish
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 the most used with 60% which is very significant.
in contrast
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 to 27% for the rest and only 13% for
China
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. In 1992, the total amount illustrates a number of 8.52.
Then
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, 46% of sources of
fish
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 are in other countries, with 34% in
Canada
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 and 20% in
China
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, which shows an evolution.
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,
at the end
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 of 2000, the total amount increased to 10.72,
however
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, the pie charts illustrate a diminution for
Canada
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 with 28% and 42% for the others.
In contrast
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China
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 with a percentage of 30.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast".
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, china, canada with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "illustrates" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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