The bar chart below shows information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.
The provided bar chart illustrates alterations in average house prices across five distinct cities from 1990 to 2002, relative to the average prices in 1989.
It is clear, that from 1990 to 1995 the average compared to 1989 the number has rather decreased, except in two
countries
, However
, from 1996 to 2002 the situation is the opposite, as it has increased in all countries
except one.
If we focus on this
information's
, on the first average until 1995, we have Tokio, and London with around –7,5% of Change noun form
information
percentage
change from 1989 prices. Then
New York which
obtains a Correct pronoun usage
apply
percentage
of –5% and finally
we have 2 countries
who reached a positive percentage
, 2% for Madrid and 2,5% for Frankfurt on
Germany.
Change preposition
in
On
the following which Change preposition
In
focus
Correct subject-verb agreement
focuses
from
1996 to 2002, we have just one negative Change preposition
on
percentage
which still
Add a missing verb
is still
with
–5% and it is Tokio. After, there is London with Change preposition
apply
the
higher average which Correct article usage
a
rise
Change the verb form
rises
until
10%, Change preposition
to
then
we have 2 countries
who
have an equal Correct pronoun usage
which
percentage
around 5% (New York and Madrid a bit lower 4%. Lastly
, the German city,
decreased the Remove the comma
apply
percentage
compared to the previous average and now obtains 2%.Submitted by santos_dij on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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