increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

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of

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traffic

as well as

environmental

pollution

,it is suggested that

peop[le

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people

should raise the price of petroleum.I partially agree with

this

statement and

this

essay will discuss

about

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both views. A very much better alternative plan to

decreasr

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decrease

the cost of

petrol

is by using another source of energy other than fossil fuels.

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only can

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benefit

for

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the

family

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who can afford to buy

the

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electric automobiles.For

an

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example,many developed countries are

usiong

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using

electric cars and they are succeeding by partially decreasing

the

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traffic and

also

avoiding

pollution

. It is true that traffic congestion causes many accidents,conflicts between drivers and

also

by contamination of air various emerging

disease

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and major impacts

of

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global warming.

Therefore

,increasing the price of

of

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petrol

is

thwe

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the

most needed solution to tackle

this

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this pollution problem

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pollution

problems.Especially, the

middle class

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peoples are more affected by

this

plan,

inview

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in view

of reducing

pollution

,

this

might be the correct solution.

For instance

, the government can take some initiatives to provide the citizens with good quality

petrol

that less influence the nature.

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concluding

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,

eventhough

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even though

there is raising the amount of

petrol

is likely to have

invention

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of new alternative methods that can

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some benefits

on

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environment

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and

also

by decreasing the driving agelimits

also

have an impact on decreasing trafficjams and

the

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environmental

pollutions

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pollution

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.