The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph illustrates the amount of

internationally

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international

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tourists to three various

place

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places

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in a Europe region between the two years (1987 and 2007).

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, it can be seen that the all areas where the

tourist

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tourists

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visited increased during the given period. In 1987, the coast area had

highest

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the highest

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value and it was 40,000.

This

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quantity decreased till 1992

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peaked sharply from 1992 to 2007. The

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mountains

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visiting

had risen

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rose

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slightly

in

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1997 to 1997

then

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this

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value remained the same throughout 5 years

subsequently

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the

mountains

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traveling

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travelling

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climbed tediously. There

was

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just

only

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10,000

for

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the

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apply

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lakes

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lake

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visiting

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visits

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in 1987 and

this

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value went up until 1997 after that

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rate rocketed rapidly in 2002

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the

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lakes

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lake

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vacations

droped

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dropped

significantly from 2002 to 2007. In

conclusion

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conclusion,

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the coastal and the

mountains

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areas

shows

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the

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apply

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soaring

while

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the

lakes

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visiting

depicts

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depict

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decline. The European travellers most

prefered

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preferred

the coast or

mountains

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area

than

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to

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lakes

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.