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The graph below shows the global demand for different textile fibres between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the global demand for different textile fibres between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The line chart provides a visual representation of the global textile
demand
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 from 1980 to 2015. In general, the
demand
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 for
polyester
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, cotton, and cellulosic textiles experienced an upward trend during
this
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 period,
while
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 wool witnessed a decline. Notably,
polyester
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 exhibited the most substantial growth. At the outset in 1980, cotton was the most sought-after fabric with a
demand
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 exceeding 10
million
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tonnes
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. Its popularity steadily increased, reaching nearly 20
million
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tonnes
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 by 2000. The upward trajectory continued, peaking in 2005 at over 28
million
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tonnes
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.
Similarly
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,
polyester
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demand
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 exhibited continuous growth from approximately 5
million
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tonnes
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 in 1980 to nearly 20
million
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tonnes
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 in 2015. A notable surge in
polyester
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demand
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 occurred post-1995, reaching its pinnacle in 2015 at nearly 50
million
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tonnes
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.
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, both cellulose and wool had comparable demands of around 5
million
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tonnes
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 in 1980, but their trajectories diverged over the years. Cellulose
demand
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 saw a gradual increase from 1980 to 2000, followed by a plateau.
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, wool
demand
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 experienced fluctuations, peaking after 2005 and
subsequently
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 declining to minimal levels by 2015.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words demand, polyester, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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