Your Overseas friend has invited you to visit his country. You are planning to visit him. Write a letter to your friend, In your letter. •Thank him for the invitation & accept the invitation. •Write detail about your visit. •Briefly describe what you want to do there
Dear Jee,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing this
letter very happy. I got your invitation mail and conformation latter. After seeing mail
, I feel really good.
Correct article usage
the mail
Firstly
, thank Jee for your invitation. I accepted your call.I did not have any expectations about visiting your country. But, After your mail came, I changed my plan.these days I am ready to come to your home. I planned
to come after next Wrong verb form
plan
week
. Because I have an important meeting coming week
. So after finishing that I will come to the UK
.
Furthermore
, I will come to the UK
next week
Sunday morning flight. Because,
I think that day you will be free. So I will arrive around evening 6.30. And I want some help from you. I do not know a Remove the comma
apply
UK
town. I have a meeting in a UK
town. So can you arrange the room in UK
city? If you ok, Correct article usage
a UK
then
let me know before coming week
.
I will see you very soon and I am waiting for your reply dear.
Faithfully,
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coherence cohesion
The content of the letter could be better organized to enhance the logical flow of ideas. Introduce a clear structure with an introductory paragraph, followed by separate paragraphs for each main point, and a conclusion.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter need to follow a more conventional format; informal phrases such as 'Faithfully,' are not typical for IELTS letter closings. A more appropriate closing would be 'Yours sincerely,' or 'Best regards,' followed by the full name.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph sticks to a single idea, and use linking words to connect sentences smoothly. This will help to maintain a clear and organized presentation of your thoughts.
task achievement
The response should fully address all parts of the task. The details of the visit are briefly mentioned, but more elaboration is needed, such as the length of your stay and your detailed itinerary.
task achievement
The tone is mostly suitable for writing to a friend, but be careful with spelling and grammar to maintain a professional tone throughout the letter. Additionally, using the correct conventions for dates and times would improve the formal quality of your writing.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,