Some people believe that humans should be able to use animals for their own benefits, while others argue that the rights of animals should be protected. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There was a significant number of people

think

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that

animals

should be used for their purposes.

However

, some others mean

animals

required

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to be protected. In my opinion, we must consider

for

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apply

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animals

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animals'

animal's

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lives.

To begin

with, the

animals

have become the most important in the Earth.There will be more creatures

are

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affected by the

disappear

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of

animals

. The Wildlife would be unbalanced.

Moreover

, most species of

animals

supported

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support

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for

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apply

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human

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humans

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about

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in

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environment

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the environment

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,

atmosphere

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and atmosphere

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.

Next,

the diversity of species makes Earth more peaceful about biology.

In addition

,

eleplants

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elephants

or bears could be supported for people.They would

transported

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kind of facilities to

building

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buildings

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instead

of vehicles.Horses have been ridden

since

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apply

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for many centuries.In science,

the

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experiments on

animals

are

neccesary

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necessary

before using it to body

human

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humans

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.

Beside

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,

play

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playing

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with dogs or cats

make

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makes

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you more lovely. Because it would

descend

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reduce

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your stress and pressure.

Furthermore

, sounds which are created by

animals

was

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do

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not lack

of

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apply

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life. In conclusion,

the

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apply

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people should

get

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be

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aware of

animals

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animal

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protection.

Human

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Humans

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could

experienced

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experience

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a harmful,

bored

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boring

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life if we

observed

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the lack of wildlife.

Thus

, we can encourage