You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The picture of the Central Library is presented in two different periods of time.
On
the first Change preposition
In
part
of the illustrate
we can see a detailed Replace the word
illustration
plan
of a building 20 years
ago. Second
Add an article
The second
part
of the floor plan
gives an overview of significant changes presented today.
The diagram of a floor plan
20 year
ago has six main sections with two round tables with chairs in the middle. Change to a plural noun
years
Although
, there are the same rooms depict
in the contemporary Wrong verb form
depicted
plan
, a lot of significant changes occurre
. The Reading Correct your spelling
occurred
occur
room
with newspapers and magazines, wich
was presented 20 Correct your spelling
which
years
ago, replaced
Add a missing verb
is replaced
now
with the Computer Rephrase
apply
room
. On the other side of this
part
of the building, we can see the Children's fiction books room
instead
of sections with CDs, videos and computer games.
What about right
Correct article usage
the right
part
of the plan
, there are two main transformations. First,
there is a cafe on the place where was the Enquiry desk 20 yeas
ago. The information desk with self-service machines is replaced Correct your spelling
years
into
Change preposition
with
Adult
fiction books section. In the Correct article usage
the Adult
righ
upper Correct your spelling
right
coner
Correct your spelling
corner
instead
of Children's
book section we can see the Lecture Correct article usage
the Children's
room
.
To summarise, the modern plan
of the Central library
presents a Capitalize word
Library
dramatical
change through the Replace the word
dramatic
years
, compare
to the same floor Change the form of the verb
compared
plan
20 years
ago.Submitted by nadin45681 on
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "instead".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words part, plan, years, room with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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