You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The picture of the Central Library is presented in two different periods of time.
On
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the first
part
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of the
illustrate
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we can see a detailed
plan
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of a building 20
years
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ago.
Second
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part
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of the floor
plan
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gives an overview of significant changes presented today. The diagram of a floor
plan
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20
year
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ago has six main sections with two round tables with chairs in the middle.
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, there are the same rooms
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in the contemporary
plan
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, a lot of significant changes
occurre
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occurred
occur
. The Reading
room
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with newspapers and magazines,
wich
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which
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was presented 20
years
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ago,
replaced
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now
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with the Computer
room
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. On the other side of
this
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part
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of the building, we can see the Children's fiction books
room
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instead
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of sections with CDs, videos and computer games. What about
right
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the right
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part
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of the
plan
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, there are two main transformations.
First,
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there is a cafe on the place where was the Enquiry desk 20
yeas
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years
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ago. The information desk with self-service machines is replaced
into
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Adult
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the Adult
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fiction books section. In the
righ
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right
upper
coner
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corner
instead
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of
Children's
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the Children's
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book section we can see the Lecture
room
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. To summarise, the modern
plan
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of the Central
library
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Library
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presents a
dramatical
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change through the
years
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,
compare
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compared
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to the same floor
plan
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20
years
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ago.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "instead".
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words part, plan, years, room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "presented" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • layout
  • key areas
  • specific sections
  • entrance
  • reading areas
  • fiction section
  • non-fiction section
  • modern amenities
  • computers
  • café
  • rearranged
  • removed
  • functionality
  • user experience
  • overall design
  • implications
  • users
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