The diagram shows how coffee is produced from beans.
The diagram illustrates the coffee
have
made which is started from the bean.
Unnecessary verb
apply
Overall
, there are eleven steps to create packs of coffe
, it begins with Correct your spelling
coffee
harves
, Correct your spelling
harvest
roast
, Wrong verb form
roasting
grind
, Wrong verb form
grinding
dry
and Replace the word
drying
package
it.
Wrong verb form
packaging
To begin
with, the first step is
that
harvesting the beans from the Correct word choice
apply
coffe
fields. After that, the farmer dries it under the sun until the textures are good Correct your spelling
coffee
enought
to roast. Correct your spelling
enough
And
Correct word choice
Then
then
, roasted the coffee beans with the timer which already have
set up. The next is that cool them rapidly until it ready to grind until Verb problem
apply
it
become Correct pronoun usage
they
mixing
but without water. Replace the word
mixed
In addition
, strain the mixture and freeze it in the container that have
prepared.
Wrong verb form
has been
Therefore
, we grind the frozen liquid, after
that dry it in a vacuum Correct word choice
and, after
while
put
some water on it. Wrong verb form
putting
Finally
, it is time to pack it into jars, then
the coffees
Fix the agreement mistake
coffee
are
able to Correct subject-verb agreement
is
sell
.Wrong verb form
be sold
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