The diagram shows how coffee is produced from beans.

The diagram shows how coffee is produced from beans.
The diagram illustrates the coffee
have
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made which is started from the bean.
Overall
, there are eleven steps to create packs of
coffe
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coffee
, it begins with
harves
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harvest
,
roast
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roasting
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,
grind
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grinding
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,
dry
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and
package
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it.
To begin
with,
the first step is
that
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harvesting the beans from the
coffe
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coffee
fields. After that, the farmer dries it under the sun until the textures are good
enought
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enough
to roast.
And
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then
, roasted the coffee beans with the timer which already
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set up. The next is that cool them rapidly until it ready to grind until
it
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become
mixing
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but without water.
In addition
, strain the mixture and freeze it in the container that
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prepared.
Therefore
, we grind the frozen liquid
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that dry it in a vacuum
while
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some water on it.
Finally
, it is time to pack it into jars,
then
the
coffees
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coffee
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are
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able to
sell
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be sold
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.
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