The table below shows average climate conditions in Dak Lak province, Vietnam. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows average climate conditions in Dak Lak province, Vietnam.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and

make comparisons where relevant.
The table provides information about the average temperature in degrees
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, sunshine by hours,rainfall by millimetre and percentage of humidity during the twelve months starting from January to December in Dak Lak Province of Vietnam. As an overview, it is observed that the city experiences heavy rainfall biannually from May to October,
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it gets a longer duration of sunlight during the first half of the year. Fluctuations in temperatures and humidity are not noticed. The city receives approximately 8 to 10 hours of sunshine in a day compared to the remaining six months from July to December with about six to seven hours per day. In a similar pattern,
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gradually starts to get heavier in May and reaches its peak in September with more than 434 millimetres. February tends to be the dryest month of the year. The hottest times for Dak Lak will be in the months of April and May
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26 degrees
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in December and January, the city's temperature drops only slightly to
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21. Humidity,
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, remains relatively stable within a range of 73 to 89 per cent throughout the year.
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