The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.
The
4- line
graph depicts data about the intake of fish and various types of meat in four European Correct your spelling
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1979 and 2004. Change preposition
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Overall
, chicken is the largest type of meat that was consumed by European people in 2004. Meanwhile , people tend to eat fish in small amount
in the year Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
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2004.
Having a close look Change preposition
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the details, we can Change preposition
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that Change the verb form
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European consumers Correct article usage
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tend
to eat lamb Wrong verb form
tended
in
approximately 100% in 1979 . So the year Change preposition
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1979 Change preposition
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expose
a fall Wrong verb form
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in the percentage of consumption.
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hand , people consumed fish , lamb , and beef in the same amount for the years of 1984 till1999.Correct article usage
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