The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.

The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.
Given are 2 graphs concerning
traveling
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travelling
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in the
UK
.
While
the former line graph reveals the
number
of travels to and from the
UK
\ from 1979 to 1999, the latter bar graph indicates the figure
of
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for
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the most
renown
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nations stopped
off
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apply
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by
the
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UK
dwellers, in 1999 and both charts are measured in
million
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.
Overall
, in terms of the first graph, there was a progressive growth pattern witnessed in all data. Whilst the
number
of
the
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UK
holidaymakers to France took the most remarkable proportions. With respect to the visits to and from the
UK
,
although
those data both had a comparatively homogeneous initial point, they experienced a yawning gap
of
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level
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of growth .
On the other hand
, the
number
of times
UK
inhabitants came over cross-borders underwent a consistent acceleration from more than 10 to over 5-fold hike, there was a less vigorous climb observed by that of foreigners dropping in The
UK
from exactly 10 to merely 30. Regarding the most customary nations
traveled
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by
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UK
dwellers in 1999, the
number
of
holiday makers
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holidaymakers
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to France was higher than any other data with more than 10, narrowly followed by that to Spain with approximately 10. Meanwhile,
to
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The USA, Greece,
Turkey
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and Turkey
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constituted under 5 and Turkey was the country where the breakdown was the least insignificant
number
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