The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK, and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit.
Given are 2 graphs concerning
traveling
in the Change the spelling
travelling
UK
. While
the former line graph reveals the number
of travels to and from the UK
\ from 1979 to 1999, the latter bar graph indicates the figure of
the most Change preposition
for
renown
nations stopped Replace the word
renowned
off
by Change preposition
apply
the
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apply
UK
dwellers, in 1999 and both charts are measured in million
. Fix the agreement mistake
millions
Overall
, in terms of the first graph, there was a progressive growth pattern witnessed in all data. Whilst the number
of the
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apply
UK
holidaymakers to France took the most remarkable proportions.
With respect to the visits to and from the UK
, although
those data both had a comparatively homogeneous initial point, they experienced a yawning gap of
Change preposition
in
level
of growth . Add an article
the level
On the other hand
, the number
of times UK
inhabitants came over cross-borders underwent a consistent acceleration from more than 10 to over 5-fold hike, there was a less vigorous climb observed by that of foreigners dropping in The UK
from exactly 10 to merely 30.
Regarding the most customary nations traveled
by Change the spelling
travelled
The
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apply
UK
dwellers in 1999, the number
of holiday makers
to France was higher than any other data with more than 10, narrowly followed by that to Spain with approximately 10. Meanwhile, Correct your spelling
holidaymakers
to
The USA, Greece, Change preposition
apply
Turkey
constituted under 5 and Turkey was the country where the breakdown was the least insignificant Correct word choice
and Turkey
number
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