Some universities students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Other believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is purely a personal preference whether to focus on core

qualification

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exponential

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good academic results in the

desire

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qualification

or alternative, the study few other

subjects

which can be

benefit

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in the practical field after

graduate

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graduating

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from the

universities

.

In

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this

essay,

it

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will

be covering

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both sides of

student’s

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students’

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preference

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preferences

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with supportive justification

and

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followed

with

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opinion to support one side of it.

Firstly

, the

universities

are offering the

flexibilities

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flexibility

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to the

students

to choose a supplementary subject

along with

primary

qualification

which was

no

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not

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a tread

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tread

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trend

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in the past but an opportunity for

students

to enhance knowledge and skills in other areas which is not covered in the mainstream

qualification

.

For Example

,

the

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students

are taking a subject like public speaking, networking and management

subjects

while

studying

the

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commerce or Information Technology degree because it develops

a

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strength,

character

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and improve the skills which will be required to be employed in the

desire

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field and those

students

are ready to crack the job market after the graduating from the

universities

. On

other

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the other

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side, the

students

are studying

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for the

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the

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bachelor’s degree in science and law which

involve

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involves

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lot

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a lot

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of long hours

studies

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of studies

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, research,

theoretical

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and theoretical

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and practical knowledge to achieve

the

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good grades or to maintain

the

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certain CGPA to continue the scholarship which is offered by the

universities

. Those

students

are more preferring to focus on

qualification

instead

of studying other supplementary

subjects

during the mainstream of

qualification

because they have

clear

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thought process to be Master of One Subject

instead

of Jack of all

subjects

.

To conclude

, supports that any supplementary

subjects

which

benefits

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benefit

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to

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the

students

without affecting the mainstream

qualification

than

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it

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is a straightforward preference to choose

it

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and

also

benefits

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benefit

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long-term in the

desire

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field