Some people believe that spending money and living for today makes more sense than saving for the future. Do you agree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In today’s era, it is an individual preference
for living
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to live
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to the
the
life Correct article usage
apply
at
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to
fullest
by spending a Correct article usage
the fullest
lot
on lifestyle, travelling and other things which makes the present moment happier for people
instead
of saving the
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apply
money
for better
life in the Add an article
a better
future
. I would partially agree to spend
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with spending
lot
of Change the article
a lot
money
for living the good life today but also
consideration
individual financial Replace the word
consider
situation
or any requirement may
arise in the Correct pronoun usage
that may
future
such
as a medical emergency, unemployment and many other reasons which may create the
difficult Correct article usage
a
situation
to survive it
in the Correct pronoun usage
apply
future
.
In developed countries like Australia
, Canada and USA
, Correct article usage
the USA
the
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apply
people
would like to spend a lot
for their lifestyle due to
financial securities offered by government
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the government
such
as job seeker payment
, parental leave, childcare subsidiaries, medical supports
, and many more to Fix the agreement mistake
support
support
the basic living standards during their unemployment period. For Example
, I have
migrated back to Unnecessary verb
apply
Australia
in January 2022 along with
my wife and son after ten years living
in Change preposition
of living
India
. The Australian government
had
provided all Unnecessary verb
apply
sort
of financial Fix the agreement mistake
sorts
support
payment
every month on Fix the agreement mistake
payments
base
of Add an article
the base
a base
estimate
family income till got employed in Replace the word
estimated
Australia
. Importantly, the people
have also
received lot
of job seeker Change the article
a lot
payment
during the COVID pandemic Fix the agreement mistake
payments
situation
in such
developed nations.
On other
prospect, in developing Correct article usage
the other
country
like Change the noun form
countries
India
, Nepal, Pakistan and Bangladesh where
the Rephrase
apply
government
is not able to provide any financial support
to the people
if they are unemployed or individual circumstances arise like medical emergencies. Therefore
, the
Correct article usage
apply
people
may have to save a lot
of money
for uncertain situation
in the Fix the agreement mistake
situations
future
like Covid Pandemic
, medical Correct your spelling
the pandemic
emergency
, unemployment, and other studies to Fix the agreement mistake
emergencies
support
a new career. For Example
, I have lived ten
years in Change preposition
for ten
India
which always possible to support
my family with lots of money
saved in the past or any uncertain situation
arise
in those years.
Wrong verb form
arose
To conclude
that
it is an individual choice Correct word choice
apply
as well as
circumstances which are directly related living
in Change preposition
to living
the
developed and developing nation. Correct article usage
a
Importantly
, to know that the Change the word
Important
government
supports a citizen of their country during the
financial Correct article usage
apply
difficult
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apply
situation
Fix the agreement mistake
situations
whereas
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apply
a
COVID pandemicCorrect article usage
The
a
perfect example, there were Add a missing verb
is a
lot
of job seeker Change the article
a lot
payment
provided to Fix the agreement mistake
payments
the
Correct article usage
apply
people
in Australia
whereas
In India
, the
Correct article usage
apply
people
have to use all saving
in order to Fix the agreement mistake
savings
support
the families in such
situation
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task achievement
Ensure that the essay's introduction clearly states whether you agree or disagree with the statement. Your essay should reflect this stance throughout, leading to a coherent conclusion that summarizes your viewpoint and the arguments presented.
coherence cohesion
Organize your paragraphs effectively, each with a clear main idea, followed by supporting sentences that expand on that idea. Transition words should be used appropriately to connect sentences and paragraphs, ensuring a smooth flow of ideas.
task achievement
Examples used should directly support your arguments. Ensure that they are specific, relevant, and strengthen your position. Include a mix of examples from personal experience, hypothetical situations, and wider societal observations.
coherence cohesion
Avoid overly complex sentence structures that may confuse the reader. Aim for clarity and precision in your language use, using a varied but understandable vocabulary.
Word Count
IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.
A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.
Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.