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The chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

The chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.
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The bar graph illustrates the estimated world illiteracy rates by region
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 by gender in 2000. The data has been calibrated in terms of percentage.
Overall
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, it is clearly seen that the figure shows the highest proportion of females in South Asia, Arab States and Africa who were illiterate,
while
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 males were the least uneducated in the given regions in 2000.
According to
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 the given data, in Latin America and
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the Caribbean
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, there was a minor difference of nearly 1% between both the sexes who were uneducated.
Moreover
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, the highest percentage of girls who were illiterate in South Asia was 55%. Followed by the Arab States women's at 43% in the
last
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 year. Moving
further
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, in East Asia 9% of males
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 20% of ladies were illiterate in the given year.
Furthermore
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, in Africa, boys were 30% and females were almost 50% who are without any degree.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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