Task 1. The chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.
The chart provides information about the proportion of illiterate females and males in 6 different regions in 2000.
Overall
, the number
of illiterate people in Developed countries
, Latin America/Caribbean, and East Asia
/Oceania was lower compared to Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States, and South Asia
; where the rates of illiterate people in South Asia
were the highest than other regions, and Developed countries
had the lowest numbers.
From the chart given, it is noticeable that the rate for illiterate men in Developed countries
was around 2%, and the number
for women was approximately 5%. In Latin America, there was a small difference between the proportion of illiterate people, approximately 10% for males and 11% for females; whereas
the number
of illiterate women in East Asia
more doubled than the men
which Correct quantifier usage
number of men
was
around 20% and 10% respectively.
In regions of Sub-Saharan Africa, Arab States, and South Change the verb form
were
Asia
, the figures of illiterate females were higher compared to males. In terms of the illiteracy number
for men, it was 30% in Sub-Saharan Africa, slightly under 30% in Arab
States, and around 35% in South Correct article usage
the Arab
Asia
; whereas
for women, it was slightly under 50%, around 50%, and approximately 55% in those three countries
respectively.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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