Children in rural areas are being left behind in their academic development.why is this the case . What solution can you suggest

Education

is an integral part of human lives, people should have

all

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rights

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to get a quality

of

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education

. Children are being moved to the urban places from their home

village

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tremendously

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for their academic improvement. There are some reasons behind

this

phenomenon and some feasible solutions can be reduced

this

.

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essay shall discuss it briefly in the subsequent paragraphs.

To begin

with, there are some causes to stimulate toddler's migration to the city for their development of

the

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education

. One of the main reasons is that a quality of

education

can only

provide

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in

the

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urban places as compared to the countryside. To be more precise, the metropolitan

education

system and process are completely different as compared to the local schools

such

as the modern laboratory, advanced library, flexible courses, qualified teachers and numerous practical training.

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, Indian

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metropolitan's

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metropolitan

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school

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schools

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have all the

advances

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facilities in order to attract

the

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huge amount of admission from parents. Another reason is that the parents want to work in city offices

while

kids do not have the

chances

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and they should go with them for

better

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lifestyle. There are some

solution

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can

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that can

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reduce

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. One of the possible remedies is that the authority should invest money equally for the

education

sector

besides

it should not focus only

the

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urban places.

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when money

spends

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is spent

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equally

from

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by

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the government

while

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toddler's

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toddlers'

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immigration rate might be diminished. Another feasible remedy is that the multinational and

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corporate companies should start their

company's

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company

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branches in

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rural areas,

therefore

, parents might have a chance to stay there where they live in rural

along

with

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a child can live with them in the same locations.

To conclude

, all kids should obtain the best academic but the village infants do not get it and they move to the urban venues from their village.

A

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quality of

education

and parent's employment opportunities are the main reasons for

this

trend.

However

, the

authority

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authorities

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should treat and

spent

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spend

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money equally

to

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in

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all cities

as well as

rural areas, a large enterprise should start their branch in the countryside are the solutions.