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The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005 (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005 (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table gives information about how visitors going to abroad destinations changed from 1990 to 2005.
Overall
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, the total number of individuals choosing international travel climbed over the period.
Besides
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, almost all nations saw an increasing trend in the figure of travellers visiting except for Asia and the Pacific. Out of five countries, tourists who came to America were the biggest group in 1990, with 680.5
million
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, which tripled the figure for Europe ranking
second,
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at about 280.2
million
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 in the same year.
However
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, visitors going to America decreased dramatically to approximately 112
million
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 in 5 years later and varied un-significantly until 2005. The top position of
this
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 nation was overtaken by Europe in 1995, with 390
million
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 people dropping in and
this
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 number continuously rose to 400
million
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 in 2005.
Similarly
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, the number of visitors going to Africa and MW experienced a steady climb from 18.2 to 28.7
million
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 and from 9.8 to 15.8
million
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 respectively between 1990 and 2005. It is
also
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 noticeable that MW was the less common destination
while
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 the figure for Asia and the Pacific rocketed more than doubled from 60 to 135
million
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 people over the 15-year period.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "climbed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • International travel
  • Million
  • Trend
  • Gradual rise
  • Significant jump
  • Technological advancements
  • Increased affluence
  • Globalization
  • Rate of increase
  • Low-cost airlines
  • Ease of travel
  • Tourism promotion
  • Regional differences
  • Cultural exchange
  • Economic impact
  • Environmental concerns
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