Instead of revealing the truth, the mass media very often misguides people. What are the reasons behind this and the visible effects on the society at large?

Nowadays, as we can see
media
is playing a vital role in
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sector.
Subsequently
, it is being seen that, by using
this
media
power they spread some
news
without
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the true story they just telecast fake
information
to general the general folks which had so many bad
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on them. In
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will shed some
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on the background causes and the impact on the community.
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with, intend to get more views and make more profit. In general, local
peoples
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do not
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verify
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any
news
what ever
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the
media
covers they just watch it for
this
, those
media
try to get as many views as they can so, they spread fake
news
and
rummers
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rumours
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.
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,
few
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days ago, a newspaper
publish
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a
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article about a famous YouTuber
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he
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is going to get married on
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official page
although
,
this
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they get almost 17
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on
this
single article. So,
media
man
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do not justify the
information
they just post it
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gain some money from the specific
news
.
On the other hand
, there are
varies
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bad
effect
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effects
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on
the
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society but
also
on certain
people
who are affected by
this
.
This
kind of fake
information
can
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erosion
emotion
people
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people's
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trust
on
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media
. If
media
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the media
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covers
a fake
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fake news
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news
and
in
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a certain time it is
being
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proved that the
information
is fake at that moment,
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certain
people
are not going to believe
those
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news
.
For instance
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2019, at the time of
covid
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the
pandamic
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pandemic
a newspaper
publish
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that if you are covid
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positive
there is
a
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less possibility for you to live a healthy
in
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future.
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,
this
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are
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rummers but it
distroies
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destroys
mass
communities
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communities'
community's
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trust as well their emotion.
Moreover
, some
people
may
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to
wrong
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truck because of
this
fake
information
. In conclusion,
Media
has a great impact on society so, they should publish something true and authentic so that,
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the mass
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mass
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people
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of people
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can
benefited
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by
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from
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this
.
Nevertheless
, by
publish
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publishing
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fake
information
someday folks can
loss
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their trust
on
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in
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media
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as it is hampering
there
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emotions.
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coherence cohesion
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Ensure you address all parts of the task. Cover both the reasons for media misinformation and the effects on society. Include specific examples and fully developed arguments to show a complete understanding of the topic.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Misinformation
  • Media Conglomerates
  • Clickbait
  • Editorial Slant
  • Fake News
  • Cognitive Bias
  • Critical Thinking
  • Fact-checking
  • Social Fabric
  • Echo Chamber
  • Public Discourse
  • Disinformation Campaigns
  • Media Literacy
  • Censorship
  • Agenda-setting
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