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The map describes the development of a college campus in 2005 and 2015.

The map describes the development of a college campus in 2005 and 2015.
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The two maps depict some obvious and mild changes in comparison
of
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 the enhancement of
an
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 university campus between 2005 and 2015. Looking from an
overall
 perspective, it is evident that there were dramatic changes in the refinery of
an
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academy pus over the
10-year
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10 years
. In terms of radical changes, the parking lot in the southeast of the
map
 was made room for in the northwest corner of the
map
.
Furthermore
, the parking lot in 2005 experienced a conversion into a library and a dining hall.
Nonetheless
, a student
center
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 in the southwest of the university was erected in the place where a dining hall used to be. With regard to mild shifts, there are three school buildings in the northeast of the
map
 observed
an
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adjacent to a parking lot in 2015 and the one
in
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 the top was turned into a clinic.
Finally
, no response detected records of any alternation in the stadium in the heart of the institution and the playground in the northeast of the
map
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words map with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
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