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The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions.

The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions.
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The picture illustrates the information about the proportion of the world's forests in South
America
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,
Africa
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,
Asia
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, Europe and North
America
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.
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,
Africa
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 has the largest area of woodland,
while
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Asia
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 has the lowest. Half of the wood is found in both North
America
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 and South
America
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. Turning to the forest percentage, it can be seen that a quarter of the woodland area was obtained by North
America
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, albeit 14% of the forest which is nearly half the percentage of has Asian region.
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, 27% of the forest is revealed by
Africa
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 which is the highest in the world. Approximately the same amount can be seen in South
America
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,
Asia
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 and Europe which are 16%, 14% and 18% respectively. Regarding the percentage of
timber
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 in each region, 30% of
timber
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 is in the North American region. The lowest
timber
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 quantity can be seen in the Asian countries which is 9%, compared to North
America
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.
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, nearly one-fifth of the proportion of
timber
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 can be found in Europe,
Africa
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 and
Asia
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words america, africa, asia, timber with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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