WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
In recent years,
poverty
has been existed
as a Change to the active voice
existed
crital
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critical
problems
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problem
of
all countries.Let's take a glance,scarcity of Change preposition
in
foods
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food
on
African countries and even Europes countries is been a very essential unsolved issue.Change preposition
in
Hence
,ill
illustrate my opinions about reason or the key to Correct your spelling
I'll
help
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helping
poverty reducing
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poverty-reducing
To begin
with, the reason of
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for
world
poverty
is “Almost half the world
— over three billion people
— live on less than $2.50 a day. According to
UNICEF, 22,000 children die each day due to
poverty
. And they “die quietly in some of the poorest villages on earth, far removed from the scrutiny and the conscience of the world
. Being meek and weak in life makes these dying multitudes even more invisible in death” (Shah). Poverty
is one of the most serious issues in the world
today. When thousands of people
, including children, die every day from starvation, diseases, or drinking contaminated water, it cannot be unnoticed. The causes of poverty
are simple: lack of education, unstable family situations, poor economic conditions and effects are health problems, violence, crime and death.
Secondly
,It is worth considering that the authority is trying to provide the needy people
food
,clothes,shelter and other facilities. Change preposition
with food
For example
, In Canada,the government made a special housing called THS(Toronto Housing Sites) which has been allocated to the
low-income Correct article usage
apply
people
. The government can apply some penalties to society as to how many children they can have per family. Also
,the power should open some free schools and colleges so everyone can get a chance to study and they can make their future bright.
In conclusion, Correct your spelling
poverty
porverty
still Correct your spelling
poverty
existing
as a outstanding Wrong verb form
exists
problems
but since Fix the agreement mistake
problem
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government
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the goverment
goverment
took it as a must-solved issue we should Correct your spelling
government
assuring
and Verb problem
ensure
putting
faith Wrong verb form
put
on
themChange preposition
in
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