The graph shows the amount of fruit produced in four countries (France, Spain, Germany, Turkey) from 1970 to 2010.
The line graph compares information about
fruits
, that were manufactured in France
, Spain
, Turkey
and Germany
over a period of 40 years
It is clear that
Spain
was by far the biggest producer of fruits
over the period shown. Turkey
ans
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and
France
saw the most significant changes among these four countries.
In 1970 Spain
was the main manufacturer in graph
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the graph
produce
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produced
million
of
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tonnes
. Fruits
were
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Germany
, Turkey
and France
were 2,5 , 2 and near to
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nearly
million
of
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tonnes
respectively. From 1970 to 1980, fruits
production from Change the noun form
fruit
Spain
rose slightly to a peak 6
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of 6
millions
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million
of
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apply
tonnes
. By contrast
, the figure for Germany
gell
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fell
million
of
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tonnes
between 1970 and 1990. While
Turkey
and France
increased to between 2 and 3 million
of
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tonnes
and overtook Germany
.
Between 1980 and 2010 figure
for Correct article usage
the figure
Spain
fell to 5 million
of
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tonnes
, while
Germany
fruit production after Change noun form
Germany's
decrease
in 1990 remained at Add an article
a decrease
the decrease
this
level for the rest of period
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the period
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Turkey's
Turkey
manufacturing experienced Change noun form
Turkey's
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the
stable growth from just under 3 Correct article usage
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million
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of
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apply
tonnes
to more than 3 million
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apply
of
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apply
tonnes
, while
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France's
France
production plunged to Change noun form
France's
near to
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nearly
million
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apply
of
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apply
tonnes
in 2000 and jumped to well over 3 million
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apply
of
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tonnes
over the next decade.Submitted by vikashin24022007 on
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