The graph shows the amount of fruit produced in four countries (France, Spain, Germany, Turkey) from 1970 to 2010.
The line graph compares information about
fruits
, that were manufactured in Use synonyms
France
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Turkey
and Use synonyms
Germany
over a period of 40 years
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It is clear that
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Spain
was by far the biggest producer of Use synonyms
fruits
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Turkey
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ans
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and
France
saw the most significant changes among these four countries.
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Spain
was the main manufacturer in Use synonyms
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produce
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produced
million
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of
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tonnes
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Fruits
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were
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Germany
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Turkey
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France
were 2,5 , 2 and Use synonyms
near to
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nearly
million
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of
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apply
tonnes
respectively. From 1970 to 1980, Use synonyms
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fruits
production from Change the noun form
fruit
Spain
rose slightly to a peakUse synonyms
6
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of 6
millions
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million
of
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apply
tonnes
. Use synonyms
By contrast
, the figure for Linking Words
Germany
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gell
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fell
million
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of
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tonnes
between 1970 and 1990. Use synonyms
While
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Turkey
and Use synonyms
France
increased to between 2 and 3 Use synonyms
million
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of
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tonnes
and overtook Use synonyms
Germany
.
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for Correct article usage
the figure
Spain
fell to 5 Use synonyms
million
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of
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tonnes
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while
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Germany
fruit production after Change noun form
Germany's
decrease
in 1990 remained at Add an article
a decrease
the decrease
this
level for the rest of Linking Words
period
. Correct article usage
the period
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Turkey's
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manufacturing experienced Change noun form
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the
stable growth from just under 3 Correct article usage
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million
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of
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tonnes
to more than 3 Use synonyms
million
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apply
of
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tonnes
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while
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France's
France
production plunged to Change noun form
France's
near to
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nearly
million
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apply
of
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tonnes
in 2000 and jumped to well over 3 Use synonyms
million
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of
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tonnes
over the next decade.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fruits, france, spain, turkey, germany, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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