Many museums charge for admission while others are free . do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to musuems outweigh the disadvantages?

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visitors

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could trigger

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between the benefits and

malefits

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profits

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the advantages of charging

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for the

museums

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museum's

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admission outweigh the disadvantages because the

museum

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has its own

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to maintain the historical

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.

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essay will address why the benefits of adding admission

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to the museums outweigh the drawbacks and will include relevant examples to support

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position. On

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hand, The

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charged

from

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the

visitors

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could improve the exhibition facilities.

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museum

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the museum

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could add a movie

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theatre

to give a brief visualization

about

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the history of the

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and why the

museum

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was

contructed

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constructed

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approach,

visitors

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could imagine and easily

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understand

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holistically

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movie.

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, the

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collected from the

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could help to maintain the

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to get

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vulnerable

as time goes by.

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chemicals and

others

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tools to polish the surface are needed to preserve the antiques to secure

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longetivity

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longevity

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could

be use

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to pay the custodian monthly wage, which plays a pivotal role

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the

museum

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.

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for

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giving fees to

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visitor

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is only certain people who have the

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go to

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museum

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. For illustration, students ,who mostly do not have their own

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, could not enter the

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freely.

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might happen is the government would not

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any budget to subsidize the

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museum

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improvement because they think that the

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from the residents

are

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already fulfil the

museums

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expenditure. In conclusion, giving charge to the

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has more benefits compared to those who believe it is not necessary.

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is because the

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could be utilized to improve the facilities and

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they have the

money

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to maintain the

artefacts

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and

giving

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the custodian a considerable wage. Giving a charge to the

museum

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would be better if there

are

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distinct fees for students and

government

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the government

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spare

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a

budge

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budget

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to help ameliorate the

museum

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attractions.