Excess use of technology has caused several environmental issues. Some people believe that in order to solve these problems, people need to live simple lives. However, others believe that only technology can solve the problems that are being caused by itself. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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digitization is taking the world by

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storm, more and more individuals rely on technology in their everyday life, even for the most trivial things.

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over-dependence has exacerbated the environmental conditions. Leading people to infer that only by abandoning all the technologies can we save

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ideology meets with great opposition, and rightfully so, as there are others who believe that

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technological

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of greener ways

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the sole aid for environmental conservation. Since

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mankind has stepped into industrialization, we have been mostly emphasizing on the progressing

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capitalist mindset

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made us ignorant towards

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nature

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, and selfishly thought about just the profit gains.

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are quite apparent in our present, as we now rely on some technological

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for almost all our tasks.

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essentially means that industries are now running 24x7 to meet the

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demand

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products, inevitably increasing the global carbon footprint. Not only that but because of increase in the demand, we are perpetually producing more and more

energy

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, and thermal plants, perhaps the biggest perpetrator of

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nature

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devastation, is the place where most of the

energy

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is generated.

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, leaving all

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behind and resorting to the conventional ways of life is considered by many.

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it’s set in stone that these

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have brought

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tragedies upon the environment, the current

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in technology are writing a new chapter to the story. Now, it is not uncommon to find companies which are working on convenience without perpetually forsaking

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nature

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. Tesla,

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been making ground-breaking innovations, their electric cars are a gift to humanity, which are spreading their roots beyond

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States. Not

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that but Tesla has been working on their take

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. But Solar panels couldn’t solve global

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problems in the past,

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how is

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any different? One may ask.

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project of theirs, which is now starting to appear commercially, has proven to be much more efficient than the traditional panels, so much so that a typical house can not only fulfil its own

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needs but

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provide surplus

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to the state grid.

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feats go to show that

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are currently headed on a

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path. At

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last

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it can be inferred that despite the fact that technological advancements have brought the conditions to a point

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of chronic worry, it is on its way to

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things for the better. Inventions which were previously made for the sole factor of easier life are now

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focused on saving

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