The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Smmarise te information by selecting and reporting the main feautures and make comparasions where relevant.

The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

Smmarise te information by selecting and reporting the main feautures and make comparasions where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the donation percentage of
people
in the UK by age group in 1990 and 2010.
Overall
, the percentage of
people
from the age group 18-50
years
old experienced a decrease in terms of giving donations between 1990 and 2010. Meanwhile, groups over 50
years
old witnessed an increase. As a bar shows, the age group of 18-25
years
old
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decreased in giving money to charity from about 17% in 1990 to around 7% in 2010.
In contrast
, the percentage of
people
in 26-35 ages and 36-50 ages have decreased to give donations from nearly 30% to about 40%, and around 42% to 35%, respectively.
On the other hand
, British
people
in 51-65 ages witnessed an increase in giving their money to charity from 35% in 1990 to about 40% in 2010.
Moreover
,
people
over 65
years
have remained
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rise as well, it was accounted for over 30% in 1990 up to 35% in 2010.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Charitable contributions
  • Demographic segmentation
  • Age range/bracket
  • Philanthropic behavior
  • Trend analysis
  • Statistical comparison
  • Donation patterns
  • Socioeconomic factors
  • Generational differences
  • Percentage increase/decrease
  • Decade-on-decade comparison
  • Financial altruism
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