14.With computers and the Internet, people can study and work without going to school or a company. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Students

and workers could do their

study

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studies

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and

work

outside their schools or

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companies. Whether

this

technology is used as a platform

of

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online

meeting

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meetings

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, many people believe the use of

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and computers could

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more advantages than disadvantages. In my opinion,

although

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internet

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and computers could hinder

the

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managers

and

teachers

to monitor

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their

staffs

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and

students

, it could create flexibility in time,

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vehicle

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in

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the road,

saving

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money.

This

essay will address why the benefits of

computer

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computers

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and the

internet

outweigh the disadvantages and will include relevant

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to support

this

position. On the one hand, the prevalence of

computer

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computers

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and

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internet

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in

school

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schools

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and

company

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companies

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could create time flexibility.

For example

, the application of web

conference

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conferences

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such

as Zoom or Google

meet

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could be utilized by

students

or employees to conduct online meetings.

Hence

, whenever their

teachers

or the

managers

have a sudden meeting, they could open the application anywhere and attend the meeting

stright

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straight

away.

Furthermore

, the other

benefits

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benefit

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is they might not obligated to go to school so it could reduce traffic congestion.

For instance

, the location of schools and

office

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offices

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mostly

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located in the city

center

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.

As a consequence

, many

students

and workers who live in

countryside

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the countryside

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or in

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the suburban

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suburban

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go to their place using their own vehicles and create a bottleneck because the road

could not

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fit the traffic. Another advantage is people could reduce their living

cost

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costs

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because they could

work

or study in their own house.

On the other hand

, the

emerging

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of

flexbility

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flexibility

when using the

internet

or

computer

could

be

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hard for

managers

or

teachers

to monitor their

staffs

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or

students

. As an illustration, if

managers

give a certain job to their

staffs

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, they

could not

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know whether the

staffs

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are

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already completed their task or not.

This

is because there is a tendency for workers to be lazy

becuase

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because

they doing their job at home.

In addition

, attending a meeting from

web

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conference could

make

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irritate our eyes because of the

computer

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blue screen.

For example

, the board of directors meetings in certain companies could

last

4 to 5 hours.

Hence

, they could be exhausted because they have to focus and see the screen all

time

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. In conclusion, the benefits of

internet

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the internet

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and website outweigh the disadvantages. Even though the

managers

or

teachers

could hardly monitor their

staffs

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staff

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or

students

and could irritate our eyes, they could give us flexibility because they are not obligated to go to schools or offices, which could save their money as well. Our best suggestion to leverage computers and

internet

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is to create

hybrid

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study and

work

so they have a schedule for certain days that they should go to

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school or a company and

also

work

in their home.