The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides
comparison
Add an article
a comparison
on
the average Change preposition
of
price
Use synonyms
changing
per month Replace the word
changes
on
Change preposition
of
copper
, Use synonyms
nickel
, and Use synonyms
zinc
for a year period in 2014.
Use synonyms
Overall
, the Linking Words
cost
of Use synonyms
nickel
and Use synonyms
zinc
were likely to fluctuate and unstable through a significant change, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
copper
remained stagnant over the period shown.
In January, Use synonyms
nickel
was the most expensive metal as its Use synonyms
price
had a 6% growth, followed by Use synonyms
copper
and Use synonyms
zinc
. Use synonyms
However
, that number dropped drastically to 1%, Linking Words
while
the Linking Words
price
for Use synonyms
zinc
started to overpass Use synonyms
nickel
in May, with Use synonyms
copper
Use synonyms
remained
the lowest. For the next three months, all prices declined gradually until Wrong verb form
remaining
nickel
became the cheapest metal with -Use synonyms
3
% reduction Correct article usage
a 3
on
its Change preposition
in
cost
, and in reverse, Use synonyms
copper
turned Use synonyms
to
be the pricey one just after experiencing stagnation. The Change preposition
out to
price
for three metals, Use synonyms
then
significantly increased (except for Linking Words
zinc
) just before Use synonyms
went
plateau until September.
One month later, the Wrong verb form
going to
cost
for both Use synonyms
copper
, Use synonyms
zinc
, and Use synonyms
nickel
decreased within a range Use synonyms
-0,5
% until -1% before massively Change preposition
of -0,5
increased
to over 1%, except for Wrong verb form
increasing
copper
. Use synonyms
Finally
, Linking Words
zinc
turned out to Use synonyms
had
the highest changes in Wrong verb form
have
price
Use synonyms
for
2% followed by Change preposition
at
copper
, Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
nickel
only had a Use synonyms
different
of 1% transformation on its Replace the word
difference
cost
.Use synonyms
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words price, copper, nickel, zinc, cost with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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