The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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the average
price
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changing
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per month
on
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copper
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,
nickel
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, and
zinc
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for a year period in 2014.
Overall
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, the
cost
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of
nickel
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and
zinc
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were likely to fluctuate and unstable through a significant change,
while
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copper
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remained stagnant over the period shown. In January,
nickel
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was the most expensive metal as its
price
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had a 6% growth, followed by
copper
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and
zinc
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.
However
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, that number dropped drastically to 1%,
while
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the
price
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for
zinc
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started to overpass
nickel
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in May, with
copper
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remained
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the lowest. For the next three months, all prices declined gradually until
nickel
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became the cheapest metal with -
3
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% reduction
on
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its
cost
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, and in reverse,
copper
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turned
to
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out to
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be the pricey one just after experiencing stagnation. The
price
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for three metals,
then
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significantly increased (except for
zinc
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) just before
went
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going to
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plateau until September. One month later, the
cost
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for both
copper
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,
zinc
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, and
nickel
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decreased within a range
-0,5
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% until -1% before massively
increased
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increasing
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to over 1%, except for
copper
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.
Finally
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,
zinc
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turned out to
had
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have
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the highest changes in
price
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for
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at
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2% followed by
copper
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,
while
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nickel
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only had a
different
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difference
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of 1% transformation on its
cost
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words price, copper, nickel, zinc, cost with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuate
  • volatile
  • stability
  • peak
  • trough
  • increment
  • decrement
  • steady
  • gradual
  • sharp
  • increase
  • decrease
  • month-on-month
  • average monthly change
  • commodity
  • benchmark
  • trend
  • precipitous
  • plateau
  • significant
  • marginal
  • surge
  • dip
  • plummet
  • soar
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