The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph provides
comparison
Add an article
a comparison
on
the average Change preposition
of
price
changing
per month Replace the word
changes
on
Change preposition
of
copper
, nickel
, and zinc
for a year period in 2014.
Overall
, the cost
of nickel
and zinc
were likely to fluctuate and unstable through a significant change, while
copper
remained stagnant over the period shown.
In January, nickel
was the most expensive metal as its price
had a 6% growth, followed by copper
and zinc
. However
, that number dropped drastically to 1%, while
the price
for zinc
started to overpass nickel
in May, with copper
remained
the lowest. For the next three months, all prices declined gradually until Wrong verb form
remaining
nickel
became the cheapest metal with -3
% reduction Correct article usage
a 3
on
its Change preposition
in
cost
, and in reverse, copper
turned to
be the pricey one just after experiencing stagnation. The Change preposition
out to
price
for three metals, then
significantly increased (except for zinc
) just before went
plateau until September.
One month later, the Wrong verb form
going to
cost
for both copper
, zinc
, and nickel
decreased within a range -0,5
% until -1% before massively Change preposition
of -0,5
increased
to over 1%, except for Wrong verb form
increasing
copper
. Finally
, zinc
turned out to had
the highest changes in Wrong verb form
have
price
for
2% followed by Change preposition
at
copper
, while
nickel
only had a different
of 1% transformation on its Replace the word
difference
cost
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Vocabulary: Replace the words price, copper, nickel, zinc, cost with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significant" was used 2 times.
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