The charts below show Australian dollars in Australia’s trade in three nations from 2004 to 2009 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show Australian dollars in Australia’s trade in three nations from 2004 to 2009 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The graphs compare and contrast data on Australian dollars used Australia's
trade
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with different three countries between 2004 and 2009.
Overall
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,
while
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trade
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the trade
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of Australia with
USA
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the USA
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was
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apply
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steadily
remain
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remained
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,
commercial
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commerce
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with China
had
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apply
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increased
continiously
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continuously
during
this
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period. The
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import
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imports
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and
exports
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with China increased
a
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in a
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way parallel with each other. In 2004, the
amount
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of
exports
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was just above 10 AS
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billions
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billion
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.
In addition
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, the
amount
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of
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import
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imports
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was approximately 20 AS
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billions
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billion
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in
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at
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the same time.
While
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,
exports
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increased steadily, after 2007 within two years, it
grown
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has grown
grew
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dramatically from about 20 AS
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billions
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billion
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to nearly 35 AS billion. The
amount
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of
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import
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imports
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remained steady between 2008 and 2009
with
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at
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almost 30
As
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apply
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billions
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billion
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.
On the other hand
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, Australia's
trade
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with Japan had many fluctuate in their
exports
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,
whereas
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their
import
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was the nearly same over the 5 years with almost 20 AS
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billions
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billion
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. There was
steady
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a steady
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increase in the
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amount
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number
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of
exports
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from 20 AS
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billions
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billion
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to 30 As
billions
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,
however
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, it considerably boosted to above 40 AS
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billions
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billion
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and
then
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it returned
at
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to
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previous
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the previous
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amount
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. From 2004 to 2009,
trade
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with
USA
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the USA
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due to
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both
exports
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and
import
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was no
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did not
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any
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apply
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significant
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significantly
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change,
exports
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remained
almost
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at almost
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10 AS
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billions
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billion
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and
import
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was approximately 20 AS
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billions
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billion
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.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words trade, import, exports, amount, billions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trade surplus
  • trade deficit
  • bilateral trade
  • exports
  • imports
  • economic relationship
  • year-on-year growth
  • trade volume
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • fluctuations
  • peak
  • trough
  • stagnation
  • commodities
  • market forces
  • import/export ratio
  • financial quarter
  • trade barriers
  • tariff
  • free trade agreement
  • economic indicators
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