The charts below show Australian dollars in Australia’s trade in three nations from 2004 to 2009 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
#show #australian #dollars #australia’s #trade #three #nations #summarise #information #features #comparisons
The graphs compare and contrast data on Australian dollars used Australia's
trade
with different three countries between 2004 and 2009. Overall
, while
trade
of Australia with Correct article usage
the trade
USA
Correct article usage
the USA
was
steadily Unnecessary verb
apply
remain
, Wrong verb form
remained
commercial
with China Replace the word
commerce
had
increased Unnecessary verb
apply
continiously
during Correct your spelling
continuously
this
period.
The import
and Fix the agreement mistake
imports
exports
with China increased a
way parallel with each other. In 2004, the Change preposition
in a
amount
of exports
was just above 10 AS billions
. Fix the agreement mistake
billion
In addition
, the amount
of import
was approximately 20 AS Fix the agreement mistake
imports
billions
Fix the agreement mistake
billion
in
the same time. Change preposition
at
While
, exports
increased steadily, after 2007 within two years, it grown
dramatically from about 20 AS Add the auxiliary verb
has grown
grew
billions
to nearly 35 AS billion. The Fix the agreement mistake
billion
amount
of import
remained steady between 2008 and 2009 Fix the agreement mistake
imports
with
almost 30 Change preposition
at
As
Change preposition
apply
billions
.
Fix the agreement mistake
billion
On the other hand
, Australia's trade
with Japan had many fluctuate in their exports
, whereas
their import
was the nearly same over the 5 years with almost 20 AS billions
. There was Fix the agreement mistake
billion
steady
increase in the Add an article
a steady
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
exports
from 20 AS billions
to 30 As Fix the agreement mistake
billion
billions
,however
, it considerably boosted to above 40 AS billions
and Fix the agreement mistake
billion
then
it returned at
Change preposition
to
previous
Add an article
the previous
amount
. From 2004 to 2009, trade
with USA
Correct article usage
the USA
due to
both exports
and import
was no
Verb problem
did not
any
Correct quantifier usage
apply
significant
change, Change the word
significantly
exports
remained almost
10 AS Change preposition
at almost
billions
and Fix the agreement mistake
billion
import
was approximately 20 AS billions
.Fix the agreement mistake
billion
Submitted by ilknurkaradmn on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
▼
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words trade, import, exports, amount, billions with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 3 times.
▼
Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+
Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!