The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the Norbiton industrial area at present and its plan for the future.
Overall
, it can be seen that the designer predicts many housing and some buildings for the future.
Initially
, at present, the town is situated in the west and farmland is located in the north of the
map
just the bottom of the river.
Moreover
, in the center of the
map
, we can see a roundbond which has a mini street leading to the west and all of them are engulfed by 8 factories.
According to
the second
map
, all of the factories will be destroyed and the 7 housing will be added in the different parts of the
map
, whereby 1 of them in the north and 6 of them in the northwest and east of the old roundabout.
In addition
, the farmland will be replaced with a mini street which leads to a bridge. The bridge will be located in the centre of the river which is linked by the roundabout. the town will have remained the same but a new roundabout will be constructed just below the old one.
Furthermore
, some buildings will be constructed, whereby a shop in the southwest of
old
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roundabout, a medical centre in the northeast of
newone
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Newone
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, and the school
at the end
of the west street, which has a playground at the bottom of itself. to put it all in a nutshell, it is crystal clear that, the
map
will see significant growth
specially
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in housing and some buildings in the future.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words map with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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