The diagram below shows the life cycle of the honey bee. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The picture illustrates the life cycle of
honey
Add an article
the honey
a honey
bee
. the following Use synonyms
paragragh
will select and report the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Correct your spelling
paragraph
paragraphs
To begin
with the primary of a honey Linking Words
bee
, females lay 1 or 2 eggs every three Use synonyms
days
. Eggs usually hatch after 9-10 Use synonyms
days
. After Use synonyms
few
Correct article usage
a few
days
of hatching, Use synonyms
Use synonyms
bee
Correct article usage
the bee
get
out of the egg. Change the verb form
gets
Then
we can notice the growth of the Linking Words
bee
's size. When we Use synonyms
have
started to spectate the growth of Unnecessary verb
apply
Use synonyms
bee
, till now we Fix the agreement mistake
bees
have
waited for 15 Unnecessary verb
apply
days
.
Use synonyms
wheres
, we can feel the growth of Correct your spelling
where
Use synonyms
bee
within 15 Fix the agreement mistake
bees
days
. After the 15th Use synonyms
day
the Add a comma
day,
bee
's nymph moults 3 times as it grows. It is very near to Use synonyms
young
adult stage of a Correct article usage
the young
bee
. Before maturity, the Use synonyms
bee
looks like matured but Use synonyms
actuallyit
is not. Correct your spelling
actually it
actually
Maturity
stage holds Correct article usage
The maturity
usuallly
5 to 6 Correct your spelling
usually
days
. But in Use synonyms
this
case, Linking Words
maturity
period takes 4 Correct article usage
the maturity
days
to complete fully as a honey Use synonyms
bee
.
Use synonyms
Comparing
to other insects and living beings, bees Wrong verb form
Compared
holds
a special position. The whole life process of Correct subject-verb agreement
hold
Use synonyms
bee's
life cycle takes 34-36 Correct article usage
a bee's
days
.Use synonyms
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words bee, days with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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