The charts below show Australian dollars in Australia’s trade in three nations from 2004 to 2009 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The charts below show Australian dollars in Australia’s trade in three nations from 2004 to 2009

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The chart illustrates the
value
of
Australia
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Australia's
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trade with its partner countries, specifically
China
,
Japan
and
United
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the United
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States for the period between 2004 and 2009. Looking at the chart,
Australia
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Australia's
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trade with
China
is always increasing, and with
Japan
, it was
also
increasing except for 2008 and with the US there is not much difference between 2004 and 2009. Australian export
value
trend is looking toward
positive
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a positive
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trend for
China
and
Japan
. The export
value
with
China
in 2004 was around $12
Billion
and by 2009 it was about $35
Billion
, and so
does
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apply
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with
Japan
which was at $20
Billion
in 2004 and peaking in 2008
by
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at
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almost $40
Billion
but by 2009 it dropped to around $30
Billion
.
Meanwhile
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Meanwhile,
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Australia
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Australia's
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export
value
with
US
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the US
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is stagnating at around $10
Billion
. For the
import
value
,
Australia
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Australia's
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import
from the three countries was about the same in 2004 at $20
Billion
, but by 2009 it
is
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was
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only
import
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the import
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value
from
China
that
keeps
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kept
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increasing,
while
the
import
value
from
Japan
and
US
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the US
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is
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was
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stable at around $20
Billion
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words value, australia, china, japan, billion, import with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • trade surplus
  • trade deficit
  • bilateral trade
  • exports
  • imports
  • economic relationship
  • year-on-year growth
  • trade volume
  • upward trend
  • downward trend
  • fluctuations
  • peak
  • trough
  • stagnation
  • commodities
  • market forces
  • import/export ratio
  • financial quarter
  • trade barriers
  • tariff
  • free trade agreement
  • economic indicators
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