The charts below show Australian dollars in Australia’s trade in three nations from 2004 to 2009 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The chart illustrates the
value
of Australia
trade with its partner countries, specifically Change noun form
Australia's
China
, Japan
and United
States for the period between 2004 and 2009. Looking at the chart, Correct article usage
the United
Australia
trade with Change noun form
Australia's
China
is always increasing, and with Japan
, it was also
increasing except for 2008 and with the US there is not much difference between 2004 and 2009.
Australian export value
trend is looking toward positive
trend for Correct article usage
a positive
China
and Japan
. The export value
with China
in 2004 was around $12 Billion
and by 2009 it was about $35 Billion
, and so does
with Unnecessary verb
apply
Japan
which was at $20 Billion
in 2004 and peaking in 2008 by
almost $40 Change preposition
at
Billion
but by 2009 it dropped to around $30 Billion
. Meanwhile
Add a comma
Meanwhile,
Australia
export Change noun form
Australia's
value
with US
is stagnating at around $10 Correct article usage
the US
Billion
.
For the import
value
, Australia
Change noun form
Australia's
import
from the three countries was about the same in 2004 at $20 Billion
, but by 2009 it is
only Wrong verb form
was
import
Correct article usage
the import
value
from China
that keeps
increasing, Wrong verb form
kept
while
the import
value
from Japan
and US
Correct article usage
the US
is
stable at around $20 Wrong verb form
was
Billion
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